There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings， in a way， especially the growing violence ，***， porn pictures， AV-films emerging on the screen ， which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings， 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换do harm to
Emerging 替换appearing ( fading 替换disappearing )
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives， despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ，therefore， take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替换Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do 强调
Positive 替换important / good 等
A slice of 替换a part of
Unfavorable 替换bad
Impacts 替换effects / influences
We should， therefore， take advantage of … 使用插入语
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues) 替换advantage ( defects 替换disadvantage ) Facet 替换aspect
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